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How to Proofread Your Own Manuscript (Before Sending It to an Editor)

I want to let you in on something that might surprise you. The state of a manuscript when it arrives on my desk makes a real difference to how good the final result is. Not because I'll do a worse job on a messy one, but because a cleaner manuscript lets me focus on the things that actually matter, rather than spending my time fixing issues you could have caught yourself.

Here's what I wish every author would do before hitting send.

Step one: walk away from it

This is the single most effective thing you can do, and it costs nothing but patience. When you finish your manuscript, close the file and don't look at it for at least a week. Two weeks is better. A month is ideal.

I know this feels impossible when you've just typed "The End" and you're buzzing with the urge to get it out into the world. But your brain needs distance from the text. When you come back to it after a break, you'll read it with fresher eyes and catch things that were completely invisible to you the day you finished writing. I've had authors tell me they found entire scenes that didn't make sense after stepping away for a fortnight. Better they catch that than their readers do.

Step two: read it aloud

Not in your head. Out loud, with your actual voice. This is non-negotiable in my book.

When you read silently, your brain skips ahead and fills in what it expects to see. When you read aloud, you have to process every single word because your mouth needs to form it. You'll immediately hear clunky sentences, repeated phrases, missing words, and dialogue that sounds nothing like how real people talk.

Yes, it takes ages. A full novel might take you several days of reading aloud. It's still worth it. If you absolutely can't face it, use your computer's text-to-speech function and listen to it being read back to you. It's not quite as effective, but it's a decent compromise.

Step three: print it out

I know, I know. It's 2026, trees are important, printing is hassle. But there is genuine research showing that people read more carefully on paper than on screens. Something about the physical medium changes how your brain processes the text.

If printing the whole thing isn't practical (and for an 80,000-word novel, I understand), at least print the chapters you're least confident about. Mark them up with a red pen. There's something satisfying about physically circling a problem that makes you more engaged with the editing process.

Step four: search for your known weaknesses

Every writer has patterns. Common mistakes they make over and over. After twelve years of editing, I can tell you the most common ones I see.

Use your word processor's search function to hunt for these:

"That" can be removed from about half the sentences it appears in. "She knew that he was lying" reads just as well as "She knew he was lying." Search for it and delete the unnecessary ones.

"Very" and "really" are almost always padding. If something is "very big," find a stronger word. Enormous. Vast. Towering. The specific word is always better than "very" plus a weak one.

"Started to" and "began to" are usually unnecessary. "She started to run" is just "She ran" with extra words.

Repeated words close together. Search for words you know you overuse. I have one client who uses "just" in almost every paragraph. Another defaults to "suddenly" every time something unexpected happens. We all have our crutch words.

Step five: check your consistency

This is the one that trips up even experienced authors. Consistency isn't about right or wrong. It's about picking one approach and sticking to it.

Are you using British or American spelling? Pick one. Is it "realise" or "realize" throughout? "Grey" or "gray"?

Are character names spelled the same way every time? This sounds obvious, but I've lost count of how many manuscripts I've edited where a secondary character's name changes spelling halfway through. Catherine becomes Katherine. Steven becomes Stephen. It happens more than you'd think.

Are your formatting choices consistent? If you're italicising internal thoughts, are you doing it every time? If you're using single quotes for dialogue (British convention), have you accidentally switched to double quotes anywhere?

Step six: run spell-check (but don't trust it)

This should be your last step, not your only step. A spell-checker will catch the obvious typos, but it won't catch correctly spelled words used in the wrong context. It won't flag "lead" when you meant "led," or "bare" when you meant "bear." It definitely won't notice that your character poured over a book when they should have pored over it.

Think of spell-check as a safety net, not a substitute for the steps above.

What happens after all this

Once you've done these six steps, your manuscript will be in much better shape. But it still won't be error-free. That's not a failure on your part. It's just how the brain works. You wrote the thing, so you'll always have blind spots.

This is where a professional editor comes in. Not to do the work you should have done yourself, but to catch what's genuinely impossible for you to catch alone. A well-prepared manuscript means I can focus on the nuanced issues: inconsistencies across chapters, subtle tense shifts, pacing in dialogue, things that make the difference between a good book and a great one.

If you've done your preparation and you're ready for the next step, get in touch for a quote. I'll be glad to take a look.

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